This land grows language like another crop:
metaphors shining like daylilies against dark pines:
a man with a whiskey still is midnight farming
a Carolina credit card siphons gas
from someone’s tank into yours
river bottoms lush with similes:
I’ll get on you like stink on a skunk
useless as tits on a bull
compliments bloom delicate as honeysuckle:
smooth as a baby’s bottom
pretty as a speckled pup
alliteration twines round your tongue like morning glories:
tight as a tick
hotter’n the hinges of hell
He don’t know shit from Shinola
sharp nettles of judgment holding on among rocks:
crooked as a dog’s hind leg
not worth the salt to make his bread
thinks he’s too good for the buzzards
tall forests of hyperbole:
so drunk he couldn’t hit the floor with his hat
too dumb to pour piss out of a boot
if the directions was on the heel
He’d screw a snake if you’d hold it still
Like heirloom seed collected and saved,
the old varieties to be savored;
And crossbreeds, mutations, pure inventions:
come a good rain, new varieties would spring up
in unexpected places.
The old man smiled and kept busy
during the long quiet hours
when there was no one to talk to,
cultivating the dusty paths of speech.
© David Black, 2017
Speckled Bluetick Coonhound puppy Photo from River Styx Scent Hounds |
2 comments:
Interesting thoughts in poem......Fabulous photo at the end.
OMG I love this poem like a pig loves shit! :) I really do! I have heard all of these things since I was knee-high to a duck and I find myself making up new ones as time goes by. Something to do with being Southern? LOVE IT!!!!
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