Wednesday, July 5, 2017

Language

This land grows language like another crop:
metaphors shining like daylilies against dark pines:

a man with a whiskey still is midnight farming

a Carolina credit card siphons gas
from someone’s tank into yours

river bottoms lush with similes:

I’ll get on you like stink on a skunk

useless as tits on a bull

compliments bloom delicate as honeysuckle:

smooth as a baby’s bottom

pretty as a speckled pup

alliteration twines round your tongue like morning glories:

tight as a tick

hotter’n the hinges of hell

He don’t know shit from Shinola


sharp nettles of judgment holding on among rocks:

crooked as a dog’s hind leg

not worth the salt to make his bread

thinks he’s too good for the buzzards

tall forests of hyperbole:

so drunk he couldn’t hit the floor with his hat

too dumb to pour piss out of a boot
if the directions was on the heel

He’d screw a snake if you’d hold it still

Like heirloom seed collected and saved,
the old varieties to be savored;
And crossbreeds, mutations, pure inventions:
come a good rain, new varieties would spring up
in unexpected places.
The old man smiled and kept busy
during the long quiet hours
when there was no one to talk to,
cultivating the dusty paths of speech.


             © David Black, 2017

Speckled Bluetick Coonhound puppy
Photo from River Styx Scent Hounds


2 comments:

childrens author said...

Interesting thoughts in poem......Fabulous photo at the end.

jean said...

OMG I love this poem like a pig loves shit! :) I really do! I have heard all of these things since I was knee-high to a duck and I find myself making up new ones as time goes by. Something to do with being Southern? LOVE IT!!!!